Monday, March 24, 2008

beneath the boughs in the forest of arden of the world

dreaming on the bed seriously, saying nothing. i look at her full lips, her dark skin, her thin fingers spread like a starfish. i bury my nose in the woman of her neck, she puts her hand on my beard, moves her fingers, i and think forever she'll be a dark ocean, like every woman, a dark ocean, and no more can a dark ocean explain itself than...

this is the book we read together (the glossy-real illustrations). we were two tumbled bodies on the bed, two dreamy forefingers in the air, her black hair spread out like a stranded mermaid through her bandanna.

in the bedroom she ties on her bandanna, sings softly, i grab her hips, her head falls back, i nudge her off balance, she smiles, twirls around, pushes me, walks away, says she likes me.

she'd put her bandanna on when we arrived home. rose, black, roses on the stage of victorian orgies, black.

in the cab we're quiet, both of us thinking perhaps of the ride, the blur of the city, the premonition of her music set to a caravaggio dimension, hipping silently, dreams woven out of the movie we've seen.

slices of pie after the movie (first time suggesting it she laughed, thinking i was joking). she talks about growing up, her mother, living in london, wants to go back, wants to take a trip, all sass, coffee, acting young, poor, searching for something.

we watch a french film. the only people in the cinema, lounging with our feet up, shrouded in our outside mysteries, sharing popcorn.

13 Comments:

Blogger gunner recall said...

this reminds me of the song that's been in my head today...
[one more cup of coffee- bobby d]

March 27, 2008 at 2:50 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you weave in little dramas like "first time suggesting it she laughed, thinking i was joking"
or "walks away, says she likes me." which always makes your writing more than pretty prose. And it is so darn beautiful.

March 27, 2008 at 8:07 AM  
Blogger liam said...

pen - me gusta, to the valley

below

claire - thanks much. the sequence of motion and fact that creates emotion can be a tricky endeavor, i think. your words are much appreciated.

March 27, 2008 at 7:25 PM  
Blogger Prixie said...

you guys seems so together yet so sar apart

March 28, 2008 at 3:13 AM  
Blogger liam said...

hrmm... i think people's fierce independence and autonomy can give that impression...

March 30, 2008 at 4:26 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"the sequence of motion and fact that creates emotion can be a tricky endeavor, i think"
tricky indeed, all the more kudos to ye.

March 31, 2008 at 5:43 AM  
Blogger liam said...

i sound like such a square. heh. thank ye, dear.

March 31, 2008 at 10:53 AM  
Blogger Arvind said...

Just because something cannot be seen, it doesn't mean it isn't there..
The silence clearly is a speech of sorts that is far beyond the reach of our elusive minds...

Then again, I might be thinking a little too deep and failing to understand the need for serene solidarity, which I cannot live without..

March 31, 2008 at 4:27 PM  
Blogger You've Got What I Need... said...

what's this about french film?

what will they think of next...

April 7, 2008 at 10:27 PM  
Blogger liam said...

arvind - you're making a lot of sense.

ygwin - "the diving bell and the butterfly" - quintessential french cinema. you can spot those frenchies a mile away.

April 7, 2008 at 10:44 PM  
Blogger liam said...

usually because of the fact they speak french.

April 8, 2008 at 1:31 AM  
Blogger Anki said...

"slices of pie after the movie (first time suggesting it she laughed, thinking i was joking). she talks about growing up, her mother, living in london, wants to go back, wants to take a trip, all sass, coffee, acting young, poor, searching for something."

so familiar.... when did u get into my head :P

P.S. n all the bloody french films i have been subjected to... not funny!

April 12, 2008 at 6:11 AM  
Blogger liam said...

"when did u get into my head"

that time in paris, 'member, muffin?

April 13, 2008 at 11:43 PM  

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